Saturday, 7 September 2013

Author Update #2: Synopsis of "The Knights of the Fish"

As promised, I have written a brief synopsis of the Knights of the Fish, an extremely basic and somewhat simplistic overview of what this book will look like, although this synopsis is really only for the first half of the story, because everyone hates spoilers, although I definitely know where the story does go and, as I said in my last post, I've planned every chapter - there will be exactly 50 in all (I like round numbers).

At this point, I am currently writing the 17th chapter with 37 000 words (more words and chapters than A Definition of Magic!), and I'm only about a third of the way through. Since the chapters are on average 2500 words in length, I estimate that this novel, when I do complete it, will be approximately 125 000 words and 500 book pages long.

There's enough numbers for you! Moving on to the synopsis:



This story, loosely based on a Spanish folk tale, is told from the point of view of a wise sorcerer called Brujo, who continues to tell the tale even after he, by all appearances, is dead. With the help of his friend, a kindly fairy named Neris, Brujo tries to escape his enemy, the haggish evil fairy Palianthra, who rides on storm clouds and lays the eggs of dragons. But eventually he is caught and transformed into a fish by the sorceress’s curse. After living in a river for seven long years, Brujo finds the poor, downtrodden riverside farmer Guillen, whose crops are failing and whose wife is unable to produce children to help him on the farm. The magical fish decides to help him out while also contriving to defeat Palianthra, and tells Guillen and his wife to eat him, and also to plant other pieces of his body around their farmhouse. Though baffled by the fact that the fish can not only speak but is willing to give up its life, Guillen concedes to the request and, in no time, the magic makes a large sack of gold drop from his chimney while his wife produces a strong set of twin boys – our heroes Hector and Salvador.

Another seven years pass and the boys discover more miraculous gifts left behind from the fish. Two horses suddenly hatch from the very earth of the garden, their eyes shining blue and their hair pure white. Two shining swords with the initials “H” and “S” and shining shields emblazoned with a blue fish insignia fall from a tree. The message can not be clearer that these boys are destined for greatness. This fact is picked up on by Señor Esteban, a veteran soldier and the local lord, who takes the seven-year-olds on as pageboys so that they might grow to become the Knights of the Fish and fulfil their destiny.

Yet another seven years later, fourteen-year-old Hector is becoming stoic and honour-bound while Salvador is more passionate and virile, with both equal in appearance and fighting skill but differing greatly in personality. While they are being endowed as squires by Señor Esteban on their next step to knighthood, calamity strikes in the kingdom’s capital of Madrid. The King of Spain’s wife is dying of a fatal illness and the younger of his two daughters, Princess Ana, has mysteriously disappeared. It is the engineering of the Marquis of Villafranca, the king’s cousin, who hopes to eliminate the king’s daughters so that he becomes the sole heir to the throne. The marquis continues to plot for the next seven years, trying to gain the favour of the king while also working against his remaining daughter Princess Leonor and avoiding the equally-as-devious royal chamberlain, Mendoza.

Hector and Salvador, at the age of twenty-one, have served Señor Esteban well and are now ready to be made knights and ride off to unwittingly fulfil the destiny that Brujo had in mind for them. Deciding that heroes must ride alone, the brothers split up, with Hector heading to Madrid and Salvador to Toledo.

By the time Hector gets to Madrid, the conniving marquis is now the heir to the throne, having struck a deal with the witch Palianthra to steal away the innocent Princess Leonor with one of her dragons. Hector goes to fight this dragon, the Ruby Dragon, which can fly and breathe fire. At first he fails miserably, but the chamberlain Mendoza, who does not wish for the hateful marquis to succeed to the throne and wants to see the princess rescued, tells Hector of a benevolent dragon, the Amethyst Dragon, which can help Hector defeat the Ruby Dragon and rescue the fair maiden.

Meanwhile, Salvador’s journey is proving to be less epic. On the road to Toledo he scuffles with but eventually befriends an eccentric troupe of Italian comic actors, the Toscanini, who travel around Spain in a caravan. One of these performers is the hot-headed Colombina, who is skilled not only in stage performing but in archery, her constant companion a peculiar blue sparrow. In Toledo, Salvador and the actors meet a gluttonous archbishop who tries to destroy the actors with their controversial plays, and arrests all of them but Colombina, who escapes. Despite their intense rivalry, Salvador and Colombina work together to rescue their friends, but come across a new problem when the Diamond Dragon, one that breathes eyes, tears into the city of Toledo and captures Colombina. Like his brother, Salvador’s quest is now also to defeat a dragon and rescue a maiden, and soon their paths will converge as they head towards their final showdown with Palianthra and end what Brujo started.


Tell me what you think! Bear in mind that there are a few subplots and fun scenes that I have left out of this synopsis, which in my opinion are almost the highlights of the book. If The Knights of the Fish sounds interesting or if you are at all quizzical don't be afraid to leave a comment and also check out my post a couple days ago, which links to a Google Drive document with the first chapter, in which Brujo faces a dragon and then Palianthra herself.

Stay calm and reduce harm! I appreciate all of you who support my writing ambitions and who wish me well in writing this monstrosity of a novel.

Thursday, 5 September 2013

Author Update #1: NEW NOVEL IN PROGRESS!

Hope everyone is having a great week! I wasn't going to share this, and many of you wouldn't care anyway, but after a bit of a slump over the past year I've decided that I MUST recommit myself to writing novels! Otherwise, I will shrivel and die.

I can't get much done at the moment, because my exams are starting, but I'm beginning to immerse myself back into a novel I started writing two years ago. "The Knights of the Fish" (working title) is based on a Spanish fairytale of the same name that I read from a compilation by Ruth Manning-Sanders. It's your classic hero's quest story, with knights going after dragons and rescuing princess, but with my own somewhat original take on it, particularly since I've set it in the 16th/17th century, when knight errants were already a little outdated. I've spiced it up with a bit of humour and wit that I hope manages to mock the medieval fantasy genre while also being taken seriously. I've also added in LOADS of subplots and side-characters like a troupe of actors who get up to mischievous shenanigans and a couple courtiers who constantly connive for power. I've derived lots of tropes from other folk tales and created a balance of witty dialogue, action-filled fighting scenes and court intrigue. It might not be the most original novel ever conceived, but I excuse myself by calling this an "adaption" of a folk tale. I'm mainly writing it because the humour, the action and even the more serious scenes are so fun to write!

I'll try to produce a synopsis, if I can!

I've polished up the plan I wrote two years ago and written a couple more chapters. It'll be 50 chapters all-in-all (a big step from the 15 chapters in my first book "A Definition of Magic"). Right now I'm up to 35,000 words and I've only written 17 chapters out of the 50! Zeus, give me strength!

In the meantime, feel free to read the rough draft of the first chapter I've posted on Google Drive. Here the mastermind wizard fights to escape the clutches of a villainous witch and the first of six dragons that appear in the story!

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BxCSozSsVZukYUF6VGNKTjhIbTg/edit?usp=sharing

There are better chapters, but I'm proud of this one too. I'd like to post a more funny and witty one, but most of the subsequent chapters don't make a lot of sense when read out of order. Plus, spoilers. I'll see if I can assemble an excerpt!

Now I've come to the point where I make too many promises...

If you like it or have any questions about it, please leave a comment below!

Everyone stay calm and reduce harm! I love the very few of you who come to this blog!


P.S. I must attribute all of the awesome new planning techniques I've acquired to Katytastic on Youtube (http://www.youtube.com/user/Katytastic) who does loads of videos on books and writing, being a novelist herself. Check her out if you're an aspiring writer or just a general book-lover!